Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Day Sixteen

The three main characters of my story is the Prince who is named Prince Santo. Than the queen who is named Queen Sonia, and the real princess who is named Princess Marla. The prince has a strong, deep, and manly voice. While the queen has a low, voice. The real princess has a soft, and innocent voice.
Queen Sonia: "It's such a beautiful day today, huh Mijo?"
Prince Santo: "Si Mama, it is nice!"
Queen Sonia: "This was a wonderful day to have the fiesta!"
Prince Santo: "Yes I know! and a wonderful day to find my real princess."
Queen Sonia: "Oh yes mijo, it is!"
Prince Santo: "Hopefully she will appear in a lovely dress."
Queen Sonia: "Why is that?"
Prince Santo: "I thought princesses wore dresses on lovely days..is that not so? but because I love my woman in a dress."
Queen Sonia: "Haha! yes this is so! well maybe she will mijo, maybe she will!"
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5 comments:

  1. Lada XiongJanuary 26, 2010 at 1:14 PM

    I like the idea of your story so far. However, you should give more details about your character.

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  2. Benny ParkerJanuary 26, 2010 at 1:20 PM

    should be more detailed with your story

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  3. Mark LopezJanuary 26, 2010 at 1:23 PM

    You should be a little more detailed and explain more thoroughly. Don't make it boring but don't make it to "straight forward" either..

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  4. Ryin BrownJanuary 26, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    it is good that you did this blog because alot of us did not but like many said, be more interesting, you just put some stuff together to get it done and that is okay, just more detail and excitment next time girlie.!

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2010 at 2:46 PM

    I like the tone in the dialogue just put more thought in your pastiche

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