Day Nineteen

I think so far my pastiche is looking pretty good. I however am lacking on information about the Spanish culture. I have made some changes in the story into the Spanish culture, but that is just not enough. I should interpret more of the culture into my story so that others can learn more about the culture like I did. Maybe I can start by talking more about the scenery in Barcelona, Spain, because right now the only thing my readers can conclude is that it is summer. This is because I told them the festival being held was held around the time of the Barcelona Summer Festival. Than I put the sombreros and red peppers, and spanish dancers, but there still seems to be something missing. Well whatever that piece is I will find it and add it into my pastiche. For now I would like comments on what you think my pastiche is missing. It will be very helpful!